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hi all just a randome story

2009-06-24 15:30:12 by shadowgirl20000

ok here i go ^_^ god this is going to be embaressing o and this is a sonic story so ya if u dont like sonic dont raed and dont comment

rage: a few months ago i met some animals after they left i did something i thout i never do but i wont tel you just yet

a few months ago

rage: damit this is not looking good i better get ready for an arial attack

demon thing: where r u all i want to do is eat u

rage: (in the sky) like to see u try

demon thing: (said with a smirk) ill do more than try

the demon jumps up in to the air

i fly up wards to avoid doing a trick but im grabed and thrusted agnst the side of a cliff and starts to drag me acros it 1 of my arms free so i cryd out...

rage: shadow bom (pointing my hand at the beast)

demon thing: aaaaaagh

i was falling from the sky just as i was about to hit the ground a black hegehog saved me at the time i did not know he was a hegehog at first the demon was weak from that blast i fierd so it dident take much to beat him after the battel i ran up saying...

rage:shadic!!!! (wihel glomping him)

???: what im not shadic

rage: (leting go of embaresment) o im s-s-sorry who are any way

shadow: im shadow the hegehog the ultamit life form and you are

rage: o im rage the demon and thankyou for saving me

shadow: your welcome r u going to be ok

rage: o ya ill be fine any way i better get going see ya and if you are going to stay out here i would be carefull o and if u need any ware to rest there is a villag just to the north of here (faints)

after fainting i wake up at saphs house

saph: hey you ok

rage: ya im fine i bit tierd thow

saph: if that black hegehog hadent broght you here youe would probely be dead right now

rage: i guess i owe him 2

saph: you owe him 2 (with concern) what happend

rage: well u know the second 1

saph:so wahts the first 1

rage: shadow caght me befor i hit the ground

saph: so he safed your life 2 times

rage: (rolling her eyes) no he gave me ice cream

saph: dont have to get rude

rage: dont have to ask stupid qestions

saph: i asum u are ok now

rage: yep

saph: you are going to fight demons agin arent u

rage: yep i am


rage: (scared pissliss) ok im not going to fight demons

saph: now why dont you go back to your house and rest

rage: ok (still scared pissliss)

after leaveing saphs house i bumpted in to a friend

rage: hey rachet

rachet: o hi rage are you ok

rage: o ya im fine but now im going to have nightmares for a whiel

rachet: why

rage: saph scared me piisliss

rachet: (holding in his laghs) well isent that just horribel (bursts out in laghfter)

rage: well nice talkin to you o and if u tell any 1 ill give u free flying lessons

rachet: (scared) ok i wont tell any 1

rage: good boy (pats rachet on the head)

so i went to my house to check on every thing nothing was stolen so then i go and take a walk instead of resting

then i heard a voice

shadow: shouldent u be resting

rage: i am resting im taking a walk aint i

shadow: you took alot of dameg you should be resting

rage: ya but im fine

shadow: if you are going for a walk u should have some 1 come with u

rage: i have gone on walks over 100 times by myself so i should be fine

shadow:(thinks) what a stubborn girl

rage: well see ya

some where in the forest i haerd a scream so i went to check it out then i see a twin taild fox and a blue hegehog cornerd by a demon so then a threw my sowerd to distract the demon knowing i was in jerd we ran out of the forest as fast as we could the tiwn taild fox and the blue hegehog got out safe

rage: are you guys ok

both: yes

rage: good so what are your names

soinc: im sonic sonic the hegehog

tails miels power: my name is tails miels power but every 1 calls me tails

rage: well nice to meet ya my name is rage the demon

tails: (hiding behind sonic) dont let it eat me sonic

rage: im not going to eat you

tails: but your a demon

rage: i know how demons work if they r hungry they will save you and then keep you cornerd then try to eat you

tails: o hehe sorry

rage: its ok

sonic: you are pretty fast

rage: ya im the fastes on zone

sonic: well not for long

rage: you chalenging me to a race

sonic: i think so

rage: ok but not right know we better get to the vilag first

later at the villag

rage: (scared at the site of saph) sonic hide me

sonic: why

rage: see that fox over there

sonic: ya

rage: she told me to rest and she scares me when she is angry

saph: (mad as hell at rage) I THOT I TOLD YOU TO REST!!!!

rage: (scared pissliss) i was taeking a walk

saph:ya right TT

rage: no i mean it i was taeking a walk

sonic: but waht about saveing use from that demon

rage: (glares at sonic) thank you sonic

saph: yes thank you sonic

shadow: she was taeking a walk

saph: o sorry rage

rage: (scaerd stiff) i-i-i-its o-o-ok

saph: whats the matter with you

rage: you scared me pissliss

saph: o sorry

rage: its fine (still shaking)

saph: so who are your friends

rage: this is sonic and tails

saph: why nice to meet you sonic and tails

both: nice to meet you saph

later at saph house

saph: where do you guys come from

sonic: we come frome Mobius

saph: is that frome another dimention or is it another planet

sonic: im guessing another planet cuz there are a hole wack of animals here just like Mobius

saph: how did you get here

sonic: i think the chaos emrildssent us here

rage: (thinks) chaos emrilds

rage: whats a chaos emrild

tails: there a power sorce from Mobius

rage: wow

tails: ya but if some 1 evil was to get there hand on all 7 of them they could destroy all planets

rage: if thats true we better get them quickly

sahp: rage you arent thinking of going in your state

rage: yes i am

to be continued........... mabey

and this is saph and rage. rage was drawn on the cpu and saph was drawn erlier on paper

hi all just a randome story


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2009-06-24 15:40:32

A story? More like a script. Plus your grammar sucks ass.

shadowgirl20000 responds:

and then


2009-06-24 15:41:55



2009-06-24 16:34:46

Maybe, you mean maybe.

shadowgirl20000 responds:

no im just board


2009-06-25 11:53:54


*crushed by wall of text*

shadowgirl20000 responds:

lol i know i get sqished by looking at it


2009-06-25 20:15:36



2009-06-27 09:13:36

yeah i continue reading it....mabey lol to long and too meany spelling errors i mean im not any more better i got a really long post but at lest people can read it and its about something people give a crap about...well maybe not work on your posts and i might just be able to read more then a few words...

shadowgirl20000 responds:

well i have read way longr posts then this so i can tell if this is long it looks long cuz of so meny spaces


2009-06-29 02:26:55



2009-06-29 13:39:32

cool 10.9 out of 10


2009-06-29 13:42:34

look at my comics their in my newsposts


2009-07-01 00:03:20

make me lauff!


2009-07-01 00:04:51

Hey I'm trying to break my record of 188 comments.But my freinds stop commenting!Be part of my cause and please post on my newspost and I'll give you something no user can!


2009-07-01 13:35:03

Mcdonalds is making a michael jackson burger, it's a piece of 50 year old meat stuck between two 10 year old buns


2009-07-03 17:26:08



2009-07-05 10:58:26

(> <)


2009-07-09 10:04:44

Somebody help!

*still stuck under wall of text*

Everything is starting to go numb!

shadowgirl20000 responds:

helps AX1M out of wall of text


2010-06-17 01:46:03

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