ok here i go ^_^ god this is going to be embaressing o and this is a sonic story so ya if u dont like sonic dont raed and dont comment
rage: a few months ago i met some animals after they left i did something i thout i never do but i wont tel you just yet
a few months ago
rage: damit this is not looking good i better get ready for an arial attack
demon thing: where r u all i want to do is eat u
rage: (in the sky) like to see u try
demon thing: (said with a smirk) ill do more than try
the demon jumps up in to the air
i fly up wards to avoid doing a trick but im grabed and thrusted agnst the side of a cliff and starts to drag me acros it 1 of my arms free so i cryd out...
rage: shadow bom (pointing my hand at the beast)
demon thing: aaaaaagh
i was falling from the sky just as i was about to hit the ground a black hegehog saved me at the time i did not know he was a hegehog at first the demon was weak from that blast i fierd so it dident take much to beat him after the battel i ran up saying...
rage:shadic!!!! (wihel glomping him)
???: what im not shadic
rage: (leting go of embaresment) o im s-s-sorry who are any way
shadow: im shadow the hegehog the ultamit life form and you are
rage: o im rage the demon and thankyou for saving me
shadow: your welcome r u going to be ok
rage: o ya ill be fine any way i better get going see ya and if you are going to stay out here i would be carefull o and if u need any ware to rest there is a villag just to the north of here (faints)
after fainting i wake up at saphs house
saph: hey you ok
rage: ya im fine i bit tierd thow
saph: if that black hegehog hadent broght you here youe would probely be dead right now
rage: i guess i owe him 2
saph: you owe him 2 (with concern) what happend
rage: well u know the second 1
saph:so wahts the first 1
rage: shadow caght me befor i hit the ground
saph: so he safed your life 2 times
rage: (rolling her eyes) no he gave me ice cream
saph: dont have to get rude
rage: dont have to ask stupid qestions
saph: i asum u are ok now
rage: yep
saph: you are going to fight demons agin arent u
rage: yep i am
saph: YOU ARE NOT GOING TO FIGHT DEMONS TILL YOU ARE BETTER!!!!
rage: (scared pissliss) ok im not going to fight demons
saph: now why dont you go back to your house and rest
rage: ok (still scared pissliss)
after leaveing saphs house i bumpted in to a friend
rage: hey rachet
rachet: o hi rage are you ok
rage: o ya im fine but now im going to have nightmares for a whiel
rachet: why
rage: saph scared me piisliss
rachet: (holding in his laghs) well isent that just horribel (bursts out in laghfter)
rage: well nice talkin to you o and if u tell any 1 ill give u free flying lessons
rachet: (scared) ok i wont tell any 1
rage: good boy (pats rachet on the head)
so i went to my house to check on every thing nothing was stolen so then i go and take a walk instead of resting
then i heard a voice
shadow: shouldent u be resting
rage: i am resting im taking a walk aint i
shadow: you took alot of dameg you should be resting
rage: ya but im fine
shadow: if you are going for a walk u should have some 1 come with u
rage: i have gone on walks over 100 times by myself so i should be fine
shadow:(thinks) what a stubborn girl
rage: well see ya
some where in the forest i haerd a scream so i went to check it out then i see a twin taild fox and a blue hegehog cornerd by a demon so then a threw my sowerd to distract the demon knowing i was in jerd we ran out of the forest as fast as we could the tiwn taild fox and the blue hegehog got out safe
rage: are you guys ok
both: yes
rage: good so what are your names
soinc: im sonic sonic the hegehog
tails miels power: my name is tails miels power but every 1 calls me tails
rage: well nice to meet ya my name is rage the demon
tails: (hiding behind sonic) dont let it eat me sonic
rage: im not going to eat you
tails: but your a demon
rage: i know how demons work if they r hungry they will save you and then keep you cornerd then try to eat you
tails: o hehe sorry
rage: its ok
sonic: you are pretty fast
rage: ya im the fastes on zone
sonic: well not for long
rage: you chalenging me to a race
sonic: i think so
rage: ok but not right know we better get to the vilag first
later at the villag
rage: (scared at the site of saph) sonic hide me
sonic: why
rage: see that fox over there
sonic: ya
rage: she told me to rest and she scares me when she is angry
saph: (mad as hell at rage) I THOT I TOLD YOU TO REST!!!!
rage: (scared pissliss) i was taeking a walk
saph:ya right TT
rage: no i mean it i was taeking a walk
sonic: but waht about saveing use from that demon
rage: (glares at sonic) thank you sonic
saph: yes thank you sonic
shadow: she was taeking a walk
saph: o sorry rage
rage: (scaerd stiff) i-i-i-its o-o-ok
saph: whats the matter with you
rage: you scared me pissliss
saph: o sorry
rage: its fine (still shaking)
saph: so who are your friends
rage: this is sonic and tails
saph: why nice to meet you sonic and tails
both: nice to meet you saph
later at saph house
saph: where do you guys come from
sonic: we come frome Mobius
saph: is that frome another dimention or is it another planet
sonic: im guessing another planet cuz there are a hole wack of animals here just like Mobius
saph: how did you get here
sonic: i think the chaos emrildssent us here
rage: (thinks) chaos emrilds
rage: whats a chaos emrild
tails: there a power sorce from Mobius
rage: wow
tails: ya but if some 1 evil was to get there hand on all 7 of them they could destroy all planets
rage: if thats true we better get them quickly
sahp: rage you arent thinking of going in your state
rage: yes i am
to be continued........... mabey
and this is saph and rage. rage was drawn on the cpu and saph was drawn erlier on paper
manicjudgement
A story? More like a script. Plus your grammar sucks ass.
shadowgirl20000
and then